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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2005-06-17 02:13 AM

Tired eyes are closing,
the night has come and I am alone,
but not lonely.

I feel no sadness for what I've become,
a dweller caught between seasons,
blistering skin and bed sores.

Touched by a golden knife, the blade,
freshly sharpened and cool toward my skin,
it was now that I had remembered the
grooves on your knees

you prayed
too much.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-06-17 02:18 AM

this feels so sad...like watching someone leave, not wanting them to go, but not wanting to stop them either...

just what I "saw"

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2005-06-17 02:25 AM

too much depends...

do you think it possible to pray ourselves out of existance?

If you were here, I'd have to run to the all night A&P.

You demand merlot.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-06-17 02:27 AM

Kaoru.....I feel a great compassion, and yet sadness, in this mysterious poem. Hope you are okay... the bedsores made me wonder.

.....jo

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-06-17 08:53 AM

Tired eyes are closing,
the night has come and I am alone,
but not lonely.

this didn't give me a sad feeling, but a great feeling of knowledge...ya know
years ago, a very good male friend of mine told me...Lee J. the longer I'm alone, the more I'm not alone....and it's so so true...

this like all of yours, leaves a great impression on the skin of soul

wonderful painting there, missy

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2005-06-17 09:33 AM

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2005-06-17 09:41 AM

Digging your thoughts...

found a treasure!

~tier

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2005-06-17 06:41 PM

perfect, one of your most focussed writes. don't you dare stop writing

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2005-06-17 07:11 PM

You always reveal youre self. An exalent piece of art.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2005-06-18 12:01 PM

and this:

I am alone,
but not lonely.

taught to me by one exetremely
beautiful spirit - is the essence of happiness.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-06-18 08:21 PM

awesome!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

11 posted 2005-06-18 11:27 PM

A comfortable resignation?

Or, Something as enigmatic as the title.

In any case

Damn!

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