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Effeminate Heart
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Effeminate Heart |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279
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Effeminate Heart Chiseled from limestone when love was fresh, you were the rarity. Neither beaten gold, nor rough-hewn carvings, could have arrested your beauty. Inevitably they might have birthed imitation, in a vain attempt to foil sawdust and sheathing, but they would not... could not... have captured the luxuriant nature of your becoming. The pianist may have been able to orchestrate your familiar notes, however that is neither here nor there, and the piece still would have been lacking. Who channeled the séance of your effeminate heart... through the maelstrom of infinite space? Me... The one who only wanted to set free the drowsy liquid of your love! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i don't know if it's because i just finished working a 16hr shift or simply from reading you ... but these words made me cry snow "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Kevin...you write in this style so well... it really suits you. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Thank you Snow, get some sleep my dear friend. Missed you! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Thank-you Enchantress. Glad you liked the poem. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
hello Sweetie, This is very sweetly written,beautiful and sad too. I still love it. Hugs to you from me Amour Vous, ;-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Love your new poetry lately....it has more feeling than ever before... ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
You are growing more and more sensitive~~ inwardly and to the world outside you as well.... Always remember, as you walk this path..... Naming Tears I called myself weak You said "sensitive" "vulnerable" "open" tears burn the same but don't hurt /pip/Forum82/HTML/000404.html ....but you know, and I knew especially at that moment, that they really do. ~~J |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have more than just a handsome face ~ you have a beautiful and sensitive heart. Your ability to express love so eloquently, simply astounds this reader. Please don't ever leave us again. I know that that is a selfish request, but I had to ask!  Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah,,,good write |
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