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Open Poetry #35

Rivulets

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-06-11 11:07 PM

Carried, hurried, falling softly...shimmering....chilling,
yet so tasteful upon a tongue, as eyes close...
as hands touch and a single drop falls
...binding them...

Rivulets flowing, following slender curves,
wandering onto a sinewed plain....scurried along
by a finger's trace.....in dread of a soft towel....
awaiting the warm and beating glow of earth's sun
...warming them...

A morning's dew....fragments of a moment
when showers fell, when robins flew....
as hands wrote a window's lullabye....
where rains ran the crease of a soul....
and eyes beheld a vision...thrilling them..
And as the brine awaits upon the water's edge,
drops shall fall and mingle.....as hands entwine,
as hearts flutter, as chills bring a sigh upon a touch
of lips..upon a trace of hips....
In wait again the shower that sings a lover's song
....calling them....

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-06-12 07:43 AM

sweet

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-06-12 07:57 AM

Barry,
I'd say more then sweet. Maybe a howl. LOL

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2005-06-12 09:25 AM

This is a beautiful write Barry.

believe in what your heart feels...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-06-12 12:37 PM

Magnus~
I quite literally *sighed* my way through this lovely offering~

'A morning's dew....fragments of a moment
when showers fell, when robins flew....
as hands wrote a window's lullabye....'

Yeah ... *sighed*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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