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...Fingernails... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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I visit you in red-blue sunshine moons with flowers tucked in my hair- and I seldom know where this will lead us... Perhaps I will become the firefly in the jar beside your ear. A pocket beneath my skin sewn with love and hope draws rings around the surface of your body I have traced... You are the contents of my heart in configuration. Words drips from your tongue becoming nourishment for my thoughts I weave my fingers through yours as if they were water passing through liquid spaces. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Enchantress...love this. It is a fantastic piece and I wish I had written it. Bravo my dear friend! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Nancy. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very nice - very special - very well done - you are the best Nancy - Paul |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
there is something so nice about inter locking fingers arthur |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that is what I'd call being close! ~ Very close! lol ~ and you are the mistress of such writes!  Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: What absolutely original imagery here ... You have captured something magical with your fingertips, dear Nancy. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Locked fingers and liquid spaces...wonderful images Tinker. A beautiful write from a beautful and talented lady. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dearheart.... "passing through liquid spaces." Sometimes, I get things right... sometimes, I just appreciate when others write things well. Thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, I don't know how you manage to compose such a variety...but you do, and it is most enjoyable. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
wonderful write my friend and if I haven't said so.... I just love that pic of you up there |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
 believe in what your heart feels... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
always a pleasure and delight to read your work i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
"liquid" is for your flow of words, always mystifying and wondrous to me. Hugs KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Thank you all so very much for your kind replies. ~Hugs & Luv, Nancy~ |
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