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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218


0 posted 2005-06-07 12:36 PM


Autumn came too early:
one storm followed another
and leaves began drifting
silently in the cold wind.

The sun peered meekly
through denuded branches
casting uncertain shadows
upon the twisted mat
of flattened Autumn grasses.

On a lonely stretch of road
I passed a tired soul:
I turned back to look,
and when he turned his face
in the faint light
I saw that he was me.

© Copyright 2005 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-06-07 07:46 AM


This captivating poem makes me ponder, as all of your excellent work.

You saw yourself in another soul, because you are aware that we are all One ...

or you contemplated your ego, seeing it as a "stranger" from the point of view of your higher self. (or viceversa)

Love, Margherita

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2005-06-07 08:40 AM


a reflection of yourself can be so enlightening.

  very much enjoyed.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2005-06-07 02:29 PM


WOW!! It's strange how sometimes we realize that our contemplation brings us back to our own beginnings....to look within often gives us the most insight...Well said, my friend...*big hugs*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-06-07 02:36 PM


I read this poem three times and with each read through, I gained a deeper appreciation of it!


EA

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-06-07 02:39 PM


reflecting on oneself can be so very enlightening.  Nicely done.
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