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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-06-02 07:52 AM

One lost its promise
and one will follow
left over right
i am the locust
the flower planted
legs in a crisscross,
i drink to the sea,

tumbling dominoes,
i applaud
and your rise again,

shake me a love spell
take these eyes,wanting,
and scatter some magic
one more time,
do it for me,

the waves rearrange,
from a schism to patterns,
sleep off the night
turn into day,

diminishing towers
as they bow to the sea,

ever resilient

the crest draws the foam up,

the requiem started,
the.waiver of faith
just a heartbeat away,
from the hope in the foam,
to the sands of the dreamless
as i fell to my knees,

but i swam from the swallows,
in an ocean of ink,
penning the midnight
rhyming the sea,

beautiful ocean
beautiful me

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-02-2005 08:26 AM).]

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

1 posted 2005-06-02 07:59 AM

"but i broke from the hold,
in the ocean of ink,
penning the midnight
rhyming the sea,"

mmmmhmmmm...enchanting

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

2 posted 2005-06-02 08:41 AM

A very well penned piece.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2005-06-02 09:09 AM

Unblock, indeed! Bottle this, and you're rich.

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-06-02 09:11 AM

beautiful this

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2005-06-02 06:51 PM

shake me a love spell
take these eyes,wanting,
and scatter some magic
one more time,
do it for me,

Isn't she something, just beautiful you!!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-06-02 07:10 PM

"the requiem started,
the.waiver of faith
just a heartbeat away,
from the hope in the foam,
to the sands of the dreamless
as i fell to my knees,

but i swam from the swallows,
in an ocean of ink,
penning the midnight
rhyming the sea,

beautiful ocean
beautiful me"

Beautiful this..
beautiful you Michele.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-06-03 02:38 PM

exquisite work here - pass me some unblock -'kay?

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2005-06-03 05:15 PM

one more time for you baby! nice try

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2005-06-04 09:28 AM

thanks guys and dolls

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2005-06-07 09:45 AM

Good God, yes Michele
This is perfection, you know
it makes me want to just swim away . . .

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2005-06-07 03:08 PM

"the requiem started,
the.waiver of faith
just a heartbeat away,
from the hope in the foam,
to the sands of the dreamless
as i fell to my knees,

but i swam from the swallows,
in an ocean of ink,
penning the midnight
rhyming the sea,

beautiful ocean
beautiful me"

Seriously great stuff there! Last two lines closed it perfectly.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2005-06-07 03:10 PM

but i swam from the swallows,
in an ocean of ink,
penning the midnight
rhyming the sea,

amazing, yes, you! So very much enjoyed this...

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