Open Poetry #35 |
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....what fills the distance |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you ![]() |
![]() I thought of you today your eyes, your smile the sound of your voice the way you say my name like only you do... so many things, so many times I'm reminded of you and it never really catches me off guard there have never been walls between us only distance and time so when these thoughts of you find me, gently remind me I feel blessed in knowing the connection remains and this love that has always been will always be what fills the distance between you and me ~SEA~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is such a sincere and poetic love note. So pretty SEA~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Look at you glow. ![]() |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness, Susan, how this rings true: there have never been walls between us only distance and time *nodding head* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan...lovely piece of your heart. In the midst of winter, |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you ladies very very much! ![]() My weakness is that I care too much |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just like a greeting card |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
the picture, the poem . . . like riding on a wave of romance ![]() Rf |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"there have never been walls between us only distance and time" ~ Oh, yes. I do understand this. You write of this so eloquently. ![]() EA |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautifully expressed .... nothing between only distance and time I camn so much relate to that Hope |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very pretty thoughts and words. Thank you for this beauty. miscellanea |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you guys are the best ![]() thank you very much! ![]() My weakness is that I care too much |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
"there have never been walls between us only distance and time" I know exactly what you mean, in my own way. ![]() Have a friend or two that I think of, as well. If a friendship must end by means other than death, this is the way it should be... never truly ending. Great write. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
aw, I am so vain I thought you wrote about me but, then, I woke up Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
This poem was very sweet. It also was very well written, with a simplicity that doesn't diminish the sincerity of the love being redfered to. I really enjoyed reading this. David. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
More wow...this is so beautiful. I love it... "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sea, I have always enjoyed reading your poetry. I am so glad you are back. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your title says it all~~ nice and warm M |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
for different reasons, I relate to this so well....an ache of sorts rings within this....and beauty flows....hugsss you ~~*~~ |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, thanks you guys for the warm fuzzies... ![]() My weakness is that I care too much |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
missed this before... ![]() familiar...way too familiar.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful spill of beauty Sea. Lovely writing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Smooth as silk...sweet as honey...James |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Beautifully penned Sea, thanks for sharing it with us ![]() Andrew |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan Very sincerely written! ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Susan - a wonderful write. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
This is VERY lovely, SEA. A dreamy read! sadie |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
Feeling and loving every word,Susan!! ![]() Becka |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much ![]() |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Your writing always plays such chords in my heart. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Susan, this is truely beautiful. Mxx ![]() "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Beautiful.I would cherish this if it were addressed to me. You outdo yourself Sea. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sea, I "clicked" this into my library... I printed it out to frame... and yet I did not post? I do not understand why... This is what is in my heart and wish i could have written... You did it for me... Thank you ... martyjo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Whoops! I did not go to the second page .... So I did indeed post before. I feel better. lol, marty |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good thing she did too I didn't catch this the first go round. Know what I love about this - the fact that it could be between any two people in this world. Susan, you amaze me biker mama ![]() |
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