Open Poetry #35 |
The Storykeeper |
Sunshine
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quote: Layers of yesteryear should invade this, my soul, but some ballooning strain of quiet entered and I shrugged to shake it off, to give some sky to my chords, to know if some wind would carry silent songs to attach again reason to life… and that is when the poet entered, who dallied for a day or hours with dolphins on his sharing plate, and he cajoled me, take a piece of time capturing yet another streaming dreamer… So it was, robustly, justly pleasant when I went roaming, just yesterday or when? The day before, perhaps, speaking of dolphins and water and ways of souls to meta particles surrounding all, when it did not surprise me to look up even though I might trip on terra, to see my wants and needs floating above me, in the most spacious of spaces albeit most obvious of places, leaving me traces of stories to imagine… and I kindred my ken with soul to the need of the promise of goal then honor the dolphin ~ a whispered, I will not forget. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and I kindred my ken with soul to the need of the promise of goal then honor the dolphin ~ a whispered, I will not forget." So very very beautiful Karilea!! A delightful keeper. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Sissie...because of you, I won't forget either. How wonderful to have scene those heavenly clowd creatures, I am quite jealous!! "when it did not surprise me to look up even though I might trip on terra, to see my wants and needs floating above me, in the most spacious of spaces albeit most obvious of places, leaving me traces of stories to imagine…" You look up and don't fall...I look at my feet and they trip...go figure. I loved this poem and photo, sissie!!! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
gorgeous~ those are awesome visions in the sky~ so glad you caught them and shared~ My spirit will rise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There are some strange things up there!! Good thing there's somebody to watch over them.. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I love the way you wonderful gals of PIP use pictures to help express your words.... This was beautiful Sunshine, and going back to the top |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely beautiful, both the poem and the dolphins in the sky. Wow! I'm so glad you captured them and shared them with us Kari. Thank you. Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Dear Sunshine Your words still shine as this piece clearly shows.... It's a delight to read for you again and be indulged with such poetry. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Amazing beauty, dear Karilea! I love to watch the clouds! They are performing some mysterious dance up there! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've read this twice now... how lovely a write |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Why can't I see my own replies in any of the poems I replied to. I can't even see the feedback for this poem....or my poem there ... help pleeeeeeeeese |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am certainly pleased that I didn't miss this delightful post! What a photo! What a poem! Love & Dolphin Light, Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Magnificent! Thank you for showing us the view. Made me all shivery. Cool write Kari. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"when it did not surprise me to look up even though I might trip on terra, to see my wants and needs floating above me, in the most spacious of spaces albeit most obvious of places, leaving me traces of stories to imagine…" In awe of your imagination, dear SIL! This was lovely.....and really quite inspiring! ....jo |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This, you should submit to a poetry contest or magazine. Really, Sister Sunshine! Corinne |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling* your writes are most intriguing thank you for this vision |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhhhhh this was stunning, it's always such a vacation to read you...and the pics, amazing...and Deer's reply, outstanding pics...I'm awe struck, at both your words and your pen when it did not surprise me to look up even though I might trip on terra, to see my wants and needs floating above me, in the most spacious of spaces albeit most obvious of places, leaving me traces of stories to imagine… |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, I peeked at this before, but didn't read it because I knew it called for time to savor. Delicious dreams, my friend. I've been missing the quiet of the clouds--you inspire me to take the time to enjoy and to dream... Thank you for your inspiration. miscellanea |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
That is wild! Maybe I need to look up more..oh, I can't believe I said that! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Simply said ... I adore the all of this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, so well done. The repeating, internal rhymes especially. Lovely. And the feel is quiet, calm, and full of wonder. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, everyone, for looking up with me. |
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