Open Poetry #35 |
On The River, Mayflies |
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sensation-pulse, gears- Join at allotted spots, Enmesh, align The axel of the world Of constants, spins As freely comes the rains of spring, That act as like a bearings grease. Cooling and truing The whirring cogs, Inside the great machine, And all at once, things ice On land become The fiddle heads of Christmas ferns, And waving skirts, of columbines... On the river, mayflies Float, that lived out former lives As flawed as lurking monsters, Under water, under ice- Ugly, sunken things That now become terrestrial, Ascending beautiful, Losing their gripping claws... Glowing fairies now alight, rising From the husks of former beasts, The pale evening dun, Dressed in creamy-yellow Up-emerges, Floats, its wings, Sail-boat lovely- Pretty, ephemeral thing Whose only thought Is of its lover, With no romantic dinner dreams... One meal of sex- Then death, because It has no ways or means To sup... But yet On wheels of happiness it rides; For its spirit knows It cannot stop The great Machine of time. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! Ford, take a bow! I'm keeping this beautiful write, with such vivid imagery, I can see them. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You took the beast of her... and made all beautiful. How can we not do anything but keep a marvel such as this? Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ford I am so pleased that there is someone else who finds the beauty in such lowely creatures. Thank you for this lovely poem! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Ugly, sunken things That now become terrestrial, Ascending beautiful, Losing their gripping claws... Glowing fairies now alight, rising From the husks of former beasts," And, such a short brief night they have... This is wonderful writing Ford. Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Nature in your words is honored. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love this one too. Just as beautiful as the first time I read it. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely |
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