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Tiersdin
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east coast

0 posted 2005-06-02 09:41 AM



This side of moon whispers stories
of where you lay your head
I rapt myself around these aqueous
dreams 'til clear the connection
of heart to heart

your sleepy sigh reaches my
lips bitter sweet
enters my soul and quakes it's
depths with a groan akin to
rusted hull prone against
jut of rock

this is the way it has been
with me         a stranding
of soul buried in darkness
awaiting rescue

light may pass overhead
but I am too weak to wave
or even blink for notice

I lie here against these stones
of my bed and watch as time traces
an epitaph to what we were
for what is

begs

like me

mouthed words in call
are silenced by rushing waters
for I'd traded iridescent tale
for wings gossamer
a reminder why I am drowned and you
barely hear songs of this once
upon a time mermaid

above

moon smiles upon you for me
tells me how your eyes shimmer
against midnight
that your lips still await
warmth promised
though oft you project  
with smoked glass and gestures
all is well

moon, send my tears
those not washed away in
darkness
one or two diamonds fading
with the kiss of mourning
upon your pillow they must rest
each night beside your precious
head
a symbol of love unrequited

a hope for...

this side of moon


~tier

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SEA
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1 posted 2005-06-02 09:52 AM


"mouthed words in call
are silenced by rushing waters
for I'd traded iridescent tale
for wings gossamer
a reminder why I am drowned and you
barely hear songs of this once
upon a time mermaid"


oh my gosh! This is stunning!!!
wow! so good to read you again!

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2005-06-02 10:16 AM


Thank you, SEA!




~tier

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-06-02 10:58 AM


Well, look who is finally home...
even if on the other side
of the moon's brilliance...

still, outshining so many stars...

welcome home, Tier!

We have missed you!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-06-02 10:59 AM


wow...an awesome piece
Tiersdin
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east coast
5 posted 2005-06-02 11:00 AM


Hello Sunshine!
always good to feel the warmth of your rays!

Dixie!  good to "see" you too!



~tier

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6 posted 2005-06-02 04:09 PM


This is exquisite Tier..
and it's SO good to have you home!!
Heart hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2005-06-02 06:31 PM


This side of moon whispers stories
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Love your opening line, and how it sets the tone for your wonderful poem.

I'm so glad to see your name here Tiersdin, I've missed your musings.

wranx
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8 posted 2005-06-02 06:37 PM


Wonderful! Classically, Tier.

and like the rest, Good to "see" you again!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
9 posted 2005-06-03 02:34 AM


welcome back where you, and of course your words, belong
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