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~K~
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since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2005-06-02 07:20 AM

For reasons
outside of
your head
I'm the apple
I'm the wicked witch
the snake
that would open
your eyes
to the truth
that poisons your skies

& bitterness
is a gift
of survival

& charity
can wait
for reinforcements

because time
will mix us all
together

eventually

© Copyright 2005 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2005-06-02 08:55 AM

patience

good write

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with you

2 posted 2005-06-02 10:07 AM

yes, very good, enjoyed this

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2005-06-02 10:09 AM

very cool write!

~tier

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2005-06-02 04:50 PM

eventually it will...and for that time i shall wait for impatiently. *grin*

always a cool write from you, Special ~K~

m

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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5 posted 2005-06-02 05:26 PM

nicely done... very nicely done..

I enjoyed!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-06-02 06:22 PM

Much enjoyed the read...well done.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2005-06-02 06:54 PM

time does that I hear
and who is lucky
time or us that get blended

enjoyed the vision

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2005-06-02 10:40 PM

and Lilith smiles?

but then, I've always followed the logic that in order for there to be salvation, there had to be a fall.

(convenient for me to think so, huh?)

I much enjoy your thoughts.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2005-06-03 02:33 AM

i have a deep respect of your work, one of pip's elite

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