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Suede
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since 2003-08-25
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Drifting on the soul

0 posted 2005-06-02 08:55 AM


I remember the first time
I coloured outside of the lines
A small ginger cat, with an orange glow
3 years old, disappointed
But it was ok
Because my mother told me so

The next time, aged 5
Kicked a boy who picked on me
"I'm taller" he'd boast
Myself, smaller than most
Between my ever innocent lips
The taste of revenge
Mother assured me there was nothing wrong
With a little self defence

Fell from grace
A growing, steady 8
Pushed down the handbrake
Whilst mother put the groceries in the boot
The car in front let out a small hoot
Broken lights and a childs cry
But mother gave the lady her details
Saying it was her mistake
Saving me, again, from shame

I was a good boy through my teens
That was until, sweet 16
And i couldnt stop staring
At the smile she was wearing
We kissed, that's what started it
9 months later another childs cry
But this time it wasn't my daughters
It was mine
The boy inside me
Longing for a mother who once sheltered me
From colouring out the lines, bullies and car park travesty's
But she was no longer there

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timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2005-06-02 11:22 AM


What a heartfelt write m'friend

Tima

latearrival
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2 posted 2005-06-02 01:28 PM


But she taught you well, and now you can father as effectively. best, marty
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-06-02 02:53 PM


Suede~
A sad little penning, for sure~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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