Open Poetry #35 |
seacliff sojourn |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the walkers of sand paths whispered their feet there and left their poetry on the pale skined dunes I watch your fingers as you move their symbols into rows of love songs and dream of their water places and the valley of hands when it bathes in a morning dream before the dawn brings the mountains as gifts of submission to her dark god you look over your shoulders now and say your sea has a master that makes her do bad things like she always wanted to do when only the black rocks were watching ________________ dark (scribblenote: seacliff is below rincon "most of the time") |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"most of the time" you are out standing... and this is no exception to your rules. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and the valley of hands when it bathes in a morning dream before the dawn brings the mountains as gifts of submission to her dark god yeah, what Kari said, adding, brilliant as well as so entisingly spiritual... Loved this, may I keep? Hugs and Good Morning |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It is always a treat to read you in the early morning, D ~smiling~ M |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there is no way to pick a favorite line here....wow! this is fantastic!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
beautiful - a lovely view- Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~most of the time~ That's nice Dark Stranger~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and how does it go when she's above riding atop rincon? you move....i follow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Even your title, "seacliff sojourn" is exceptionally poetic. You are a poet through and through! Love & Light, EA |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
wow.........that's all.....just wow |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is exquisite. Enjoyed the read. |
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