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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2005-05-31 07:06 AM



the walkers of sand paths
whispered their feet there
and left their poetry
on the pale skined dunes

I watch your fingers
as you move their symbols
into rows of love songs
and dream of their water places

and the valley of hands
when it bathes in a morning dream
before the dawn brings the mountains
as gifts of submission to her dark god

you look over your shoulders now
and say your sea has a master
that makes her do bad things
like she always wanted to do

when only the black rocks were watching
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dark (scribblenote: seacliff is below rincon "most of the time")

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-05-31 07:17 AM


"most of the time"
you are
out
standing...

and this is no exception
to your rules.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-05-31 07:33 AM


and the valley of hands
when it bathes in a morning dream
before the dawn brings the mountains
as gifts of submission to her dark god


yeah, what Kari said, adding, brilliant as well as so entisingly spiritual...

Loved this, may I keep?

Hugs and Good Morning

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-05-31 07:33 AM


It is always a treat to read you in the early morning, D

~smiling~
M

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2005-05-31 09:16 AM


there is no way to pick a favorite line here....wow! this is fantastic!!
Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-05-31 09:46 AM


beautiful - a lovely view-

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2005-05-31 01:05 PM


~most of the time~

  That's nice Dark Stranger~

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
7 posted 2005-06-01 08:12 AM


and how does it go when she's above riding atop rincon?
you move....i follow

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2005-06-01 08:16 AM


Even your title, "seacliff sojourn" is exceptionally poetic. You are a poet through and through!

Love & Light,
EA

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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9 posted 2005-06-02 03:08 AM


wow.........that's all.....just wow
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
10 posted 2005-06-02 02:46 PM


This is exquisite. Enjoyed the read.
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