Open Poetry #35 |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA ![]() |
T&A I love the snow. It makes my day, to see it fall from clouds of gray. Each flake unique, or so they say. Mosaics traced on pane betrays the truth of where my core child plays, The hoary land of Tea and Eh Where now I live in desert way with painted mountains to survey and sip in life above the fray I find my muse is kept at bay til in my mind I slip away Back to the land of Tea and Eh Oh! Canada though I’m away the maple leaf I still see sway before my eyes most every day Though years may pass I still will pray For my return To you someday My native land of Tea and Eh! never try to teach a pig to sing it wastes your time AND annoys the pig |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Bart Being a closet dirty old man, the title was an immediate attraction...lol But I see it is a serious poem,writen with a touch of humor, nicely done, Eh! ------------ice ><> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said my fellow Canadian! Yes..that sounds like home perfectly, eh? Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always dancing with you in the summer rain~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bart~ Touching home poetically always brings a misty-eyed smile~ 'Mosaics traced on pane betrays the truth of where my core child plays' I LIKE THIS !!! *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I must say you remind us why we love our Canadian home...I hope someday you will fulfill your dream and return to the north to again enjoy those things you fondly remember...*hugs* from the Prairies... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very sweet tribute. and Ice? we knew.... ![]() "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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