Open Poetry #35 |
later |
PazSqual Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 71 |
later i sometimes wonder how long later could be could it be a few minutes an hour or two or maybe one, two or three days, who knows probably a week, a month or even a year i sometimes wonder how long later could be but how ever long later is it always feels like a lifetime |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it does doesn't it... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"but how ever long later is it always feels like a lifetime" Absolutely right! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
"later" is indeed a long time coming, when and if it ever does. Good poem, PazSqual~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always something to look forward to! TD |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
That is so true. Enjoyed your piece. Kristabell |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
later is like goodbye with a guarantee... it's the time between hello's... enjoyed this. we are what we seek |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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