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PazSqual
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0 posted 2005-06-01 03:37 PM



later

i sometimes wonder how long
later could be
could it be a few minutes an hour or two
or maybe one, two or three days, who knows
probably a week, a month or even a year

i sometimes wonder how long
later could be
but how ever long later is
it always feels like a lifetime

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1 posted 2005-06-01 05:22 PM


it does doesn't it...

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2005-06-01 05:36 PM


"but how ever long later is
it always feels like a lifetime"

Absolutely right!


BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2005-06-01 06:13 PM


"later" is indeed a long time coming, when and if it ever does.

Good poem, PazSqual~

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2005-06-01 06:51 PM


Always something to look forward to!

TD

Kristabell
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5 posted 2005-06-01 08:47 PM


That is so true. Enjoyed your piece.

Kristabell

Ethan Halo
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on the roof again
6 posted 2005-06-02 01:31 AM


later is like goodbye with a guarantee...
it's the time between hello's...

enjoyed this.

we are what we seek

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-06-02 10:31 AM


good write
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