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bittersweet (blood and rainbows)
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bittersweet (blood and rainbows) |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again 
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i posted a few under a different name a couple of years ago, and some people figured it out even... but i wanted to try and get some creative juices flowing by reading some of yours (and mine as well) and nothing's coming just yet... so i figured a lil repost might help the brain along... in the meantime, enjoy. _______________________________ *bittersweet (blood and rainbows) blood and rainbows; all i see and this is my apology it wasn't supposed to get out of hand you were just supposed to understand and all your smiles can't save this hurt all i wanted... and all the lines get a little blurred all i wanted... and i'm not sure that my heart can convince my nerve the memory starts to fade the dreams turn into stains a bittersweet eulogy blood and rainbows; all i see i don't want your sympathy lonely mornings from last night's lust the guilty flowers have turned to dust all the days you left me here all i wanted... last night's promises in my ears all i wanted... confusion clears and i'm left choking on the fear the memory starts to fade the dreams turn into stains a bittersweet eulogy blood and rainbows; all i see still the pain shows through the seams technicolor dreams of you and me on a black and white reality and now i see we'll never be the things i thought we were it's killin' me, but i believe that the world is still pure words unspoken, rip me open now i'm dying on the bedroom floor blood and rainbow's symphony a bittersweet cacophony we are what we seek |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
now you make me wonder what name you posted this under....it reads familiar, like I've read it before, but can't be sure....either way, I liked it this time  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bittersweet indeed thanks for reposting this |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I really liked the flow of this... do write more. ~tier |
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