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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-06-01 06:57 AM

do you love the sound of morning
when the women are crying
pretending to be the wind
escaping from another room

when the sky is still dark
and the blood on the ground
is warm enough to touch
and does not feel lifeless yet

do you savor the smells of ash
and sulphur seeping beyond roses
and the boredom of concrete
wearing asundered dress olive

with brass accessories
as simi-formal explosive
in a crowded room of appreciation
standing on tiptoes of freedom

where flagless arms cease to wave
______________
dark (scribblenote: for sgt joe in bagdad heaven, rip amigo)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-06-01 07:01 AM

hugyou thoughts

M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-06-01 07:10 AM

RIP, compatriot of DS.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2005-06-01 08:06 AM

somber song
crying winds
lightened in
the touch of dark

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2005-06-01 08:16 AM

sending mothy hugs for your loss...
nodding me mothy head at this profoundly impressive write...
you paid him an outstanding poetic honor with this D.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2005-06-01 09:05 AM

echoing the others and offering my

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-06-01 10:19 AM

my heartfelt hugs D -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2005-06-01 06:28 PM

This is a fine tribute DS, and a sad reminder
of these times we are living in.

*hug*

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2005-06-01 06:41 PM

Sending hugs with the others...so touched by this, especially:

"with brass accessories
as simi-formal explosive
in a crowded room of appreciation
standing on tiptoes of freedom

where flagless arms cease to wave"

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

9 posted 2005-06-02 03:04 AM

hmmm made me think and visualize

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