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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-06-02 12:11 PM



breeze,
summer print dress
dances around you

as the insolent wind
interrogates your curves
and cools your heat —

I envy his brazenness...
(just for a moment)

— then ride with the wind...

CG

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-06-02 12:18 PM


good piece!
Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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2 posted 2005-06-02 12:31 PM


Excellent
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-06-02 12:55 PM


WOW!!!!!!!   EXCELLENT!
I'm keeping this!!!!!!!
Left me speechless, ya did!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
4 posted 2005-06-02 01:21 PM


very good. enjoyed. marty
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