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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2005-05-31 12:40 PM

The ocean began

as one raindrop said “Yes, fall..."

and became the sea.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2005-05-31 12:41 PM

Yes !!!

This is brilliant and beautiful, glad I decided to pop back in before I headed to bed for the night !!

I loved it - so simple, yet so full of truth and emotion.

Thank you for sharing

Tima

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-05-31 12:59 PM

Ed

So many things start in just this simple way...yet we don't think about it until someone insightful writes a poem about it and then we just say, wow! Yes!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2005-05-31 01:01 AM

smile

a powerful word indeed

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-05-31 07:47 AM

I can't imagine what life would be like without the ocean...thank goodness for it, and for you....

beginnings have a way of boiling over to something new and new again....

Hugs for this one

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-05-31 08:34 AM

Powerful!! Beautiful!! Bravo!!
I LOVE THIS!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Aleta
Member

since 2005-04-17

Posts 102
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-05-31 11:43 AM

To coax a raindrop... into something so lovely, but with such simplicity. Ah, Sweet Write!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2005-05-31 12:53 PM

Oh yes, love that thought!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-05-31 03:41 PM

This... is exquisite. *S*

And it's going into my library... *S* I know that studying your work won't make me less wordy... but the study is pure pleasure. *S*

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

9 posted 2005-05-31 03:47 PM

Haiku, the way it is supposed to be, complete down to the voice of nature.

Nicely done

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

10 posted 2005-05-31 04:00 PM

Very nice

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2005-05-31 09:20 PM

Fulfilling!

Truly wonderful write.
TD

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2005-05-31 09:20 PM

Thought I'd read that again.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

13 posted 2005-05-31 10:05 PM

Ratleader,
Have I told you I just love how your mind works? Well, I do! Love how you make profound the simplest of things.
miscellanea

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

14 posted 2005-06-01 05:39 PM

and even so the high tide,
when my love spoke the first lie.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2005-06-01 05:43 PM

I can not tell you how much I appreciate this, and how powerful it really is....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

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