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Canuckster
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since 2002-01-09
Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

0 posted 2005-06-01 12:13 PM


Surprise!

Deepthroat is out!
He's now confessed!
Of covertness,
he's quite bereft!

That gaping chasm
past his tongue
has spewn the truth
and climbed a rung

Up hist'ry's ladder
to display
for all to see
and quote as may.

The missing piece
who hid, so slick
who brought down hard
that tricky Dick!

A denouement
he's almost faded
A brief repose
'mongst so much jaded

Enjoy the limelight
Egyptian Pharynx!
Now speak from
Your much shallowed larynx.

(c) Bart Breen 2005

© Copyright 2005 Bart Breen - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-06-01 10:38 AM


lol

yes...the now old man confesses whereas before he denied...

*shrug*

nice writing!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2005-06-01 07:03 PM


I need to be careful what I say here  because I'm not up to debating the subject.  It's very strange if you ask me, but nothing surprises me anymore.

  
Enjoyed your take,  Canuckster~

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