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Soulfisher
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0 posted 2005-05-30 07:00 AM



I see you walk in casted shadows
and outstretched arms towards me.
As the sea sips the milk of moon
In slow drawing pulls
From your eyes
In endless thirst
Leaving me to rise and fall in spirit and self
With every crashing heartbeat of wave
In the slow intertwining enkindle
Of this soul out of my soul
As it Melts into one
While I spread you softly
Across my lips
In long lingering taste
As two points collide.
In slow dance burn
And everlasting bliss.
Beyond reflected shimmers
Of love shared
In our eyes
We shall dance
In sacred passion
Of one another
Till the twilight of heaven fades
And the dust and ashes of the stars
That formed you
No longer burn and dance in reflection
of us.
and I meet you again on the other side



Though it has never stepped past fear
would you still accept my heart
knowing that it is all I have to give.

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2005-05-30 09:14 AM


Oh,
This is an enchanting write.
Stunning.
TD

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2005-05-30 09:20 AM


Again!
TD


nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2005-05-30 09:33 AM


While I spread you softly
Across my lips
In long lingering taste


left me with a soft lingering feel...of thoughts

M

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-05-30 05:15 PM


SoulFisher~

'Till the twilight of heaven fades
And the dust and ashes of the stars
That formed you
No longer burn and dance in reflection
of us.
and I meet you again on the other side'


These are such lovely thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-05-30 06:51 PM


very pretty
timothysangel1973
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6 posted 2005-05-31 12:46 PM


I echo the words above me m'friend


Martie
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7 posted 2005-05-31 01:02 AM


Very beautifully done!
Soulfisher
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8 posted 2005-05-31 04:13 AM


TD thanks for both of your responses. Im always glad to see you sparkle upon these pages. And the poems you have been posting lately are amazing

Soulfisher
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9 posted 2005-05-31 04:17 AM


Nakdthoughts, well what can I say nobody spreads it quite like me.(just joking)
Soulfisher
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10 posted 2005-05-31 04:20 AM


Marge hugs back at ya and glad you liked my final thoughts.
Soulfisher
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11 posted 2005-05-31 04:30 AM


Passing shadows thanks for dropping me a line.

Timothysangel1973 Thanks for the stirring echo back.

Martie thanks for your feed back dear.

I hope everyone had a safe and enjoyable memorial weekend and thanks again for all the replys.

Paul Wilson
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12 posted 2005-05-31 05:19 AM


Soulfisher...Lovely words and thoughts danced across my mind while reading. Enjoyed very much...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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