Open Poetry #35 |
This soul out of my soul |
Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
I see you walk in casted shadows and outstretched arms towards me. As the sea sips the milk of moon In slow drawing pulls From your eyes In endless thirst Leaving me to rise and fall in spirit and self With every crashing heartbeat of wave In the slow intertwining enkindle Of this soul out of my soul As it Melts into one While I spread you softly Across my lips In long lingering taste As two points collide. In slow dance burn And everlasting bliss. Beyond reflected shimmers Of love shared In our eyes We shall dance In sacred passion Of one another Till the twilight of heaven fades And the dust and ashes of the stars That formed you No longer burn and dance in reflection of us. and I meet you again on the other side Though it has never stepped past fear would you still accept my heart knowing that it is all I have to give. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, This is an enchanting write. Stunning. TD |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Again! TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
While I spread you softly Across my lips In long lingering taste left me with a soft lingering feel...of thoughts M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoulFisher~ 'Till the twilight of heaven fades And the dust and ashes of the stars That formed you No longer burn and dance in reflection of us. and I meet you again on the other side' These are such lovely thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I echo the words above me m'friend |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very beautifully done! |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
TD thanks for both of your responses. Im always glad to see you sparkle upon these pages. And the poems you have been posting lately are amazing |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Nakdthoughts, well what can I say nobody spreads it quite like me.(just joking) |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Marge hugs back at ya and glad you liked my final thoughts. |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Passing shadows thanks for dropping me a line. Timothysangel1973 Thanks for the stirring echo back. Martie thanks for your feed back dear. I hope everyone had a safe and enjoyable memorial weekend and thanks again for all the replys. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Soulfisher...Lovely words and thoughts danced across my mind while reading. Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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