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Take that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I showed you a leaf trick once, with the sky as my parachute, i rode off with your awe into the soul of obvlivion, and o how i dazzled you !! but my heartwings grew crutches when i attempted to shed more than the prettypink of myself " off kilter !! imposter!!!" you throw wordstones at me.... " demented and twisted," now my ailing arms weep, so you run and how can i blame you now, when loose leaves and broken branches exchange prints, and drop formalities in one unchartered romance, where only a betterman (than you) dare go. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (05-25-2005 08:07 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Got the message enjoyed the read. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
packs a punch, pow - enjoyed inky-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
some people, always have a vision in their minds of the perfect mate...woman or man...and then when the newness wears off, and that person becomes normally with flaw...which I might add, makes up the specialness of each individual...those persons, have set up a vision that no one will ever reach, and they run, run, run, believing in their minds, that they're justified...which also intensifies the blame on the individual who made a mistake... no one is perfect, there are no angels, knights in shining armor...nothing left but real unadulterated life...so don't feel to badly, if it didn't happen now, it would have eventually...understand? Love is not pure fantasy, it is real, with real good times, and real not so good times...maturity stays, responsible stays, love stays...and doesn't jump in and out of relationships. Hugs to you sweet lady |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Doing it to you again and again. Keep it up! |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
OUCH!! Those wordstones can really hurt! Loved this one adagio |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"where only a betterman (than you) dare go." Oooh, I like this |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Michele....all I can say is, "WOW!" You do leaf tricks in print!  ....jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
with the sky as my parachute you throw wordstones at me.... when loose leaves and broken branches exchange prints, and drop formalities in one unchartered romance, where only a betterman (than you) dare go. O, i've been waiting for you ...sigh, absolutely wondermous. Now i can get on with the day. Great ending! library more please M "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good words here, thanks for sharing My spirit will rise |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 outstanding!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Unchartered romance is a nice touch! Wonderful write Michele~ Go get em, girlie! |
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