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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A dalliance of dawn bequeaths her silk sarong In frosting of imaginations whim Elusive wings conclude Waning to the left, to the right The mist at my fingertips If I hire a ride through the fog once belied Touching foot on a shore of sweet grass Listening to gurgled tunes that alas Hold myself close to the firestone A sunrise that expects you Each teardrop that reflects you Seems to sound a deep and hollow throat Making wishes far too intimate to note Though lips round about the need Roaming chances that become a sunset Splashing color in the blushes of my mind Cool the canvas clouds, laying low More than I could ever know And I wait to find another day Someone near to hear the cream colored sway A dalliance of dawn bequeaths her silk sarong And under buttered morn my eyes converse with promise Copyright Kkh 5/29/05 |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Exquisite write TD. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have such a way with words and thoughts it always makes me smile |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Wow TD, your work is always inspiring. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, you convey so much beauty through your writing. Only someone with such beauty within could write as you do, Dear Poetess. You truly have a gift and thank you for sharing it with us all.  Love & Light, EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you all for your sweet replies. Enjoy the sunshine. TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply lovely, well done, pleasant read...had a tone of classics, rich and full of life...bittersweet yet, such a grand ending.... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Most eloquently expressed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Splashing color in the blushes of my mind Cool the canvas clouds, laying low More than I could ever know And I wait to find another day Someone near to hear the cream colored sway such tenderness in your words as you write of that fragile yet sometimes unyielding veil between |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Aliterations, internal rhymes and beautiful imagery make this poem as real pleasure to read. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ All of the beauty of YOU is splashed across the page in this exceptional write~ 'A sunrise that expects you' Oh ... oh ... how that line gives me a *smile*~ *Huglets* dear poetess~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
As always, your writing is as smooth as silk, and sashays down the page so prettily. I don't know how you do it Kathleen, but I'm so glad you do. |
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