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Open Poetry #35

Where Do I Fit In?

startin_fresh
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 137
US

0 posted 2005-05-29 12:16 PM

Your presence consumes me
The lure of your perfume
Blended with body chemistry
A seductive invitation to me

You are tough out there
In the world of business
Yet in the safety of solitude
You’re spirit longs to play

I’ve caressed your body from
End to end, time and again
Yet- now I can’t touch you
Because you’re Born Again

I can’t ignore what once
Was a passionate relationship
Where spirit, mind and body
Intertwined to bring us to one

I feel I’ve lost the battle
For your love and attention
When there seems so little
Room between Work and Church

Nothing hurts more than sitting next to the one you love - knowing it will never be.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-05-29 12:37 PM

you should tell this person how you feel...I hope it works out

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-05-29 05:49 PM

life gets in the way

I do know this feeling well

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

3 posted 2005-05-29 07:05 PM

while wallowing and pining make for heartfelt poetry, like yours here, she has her own path to follow...
as you do yours.

your verse is tragic and conveys your emotions and tells your story well...

we are what we seek

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