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Open Poetry #35

to ride a breath

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2005-05-26 08:20 PM

Clear felt
from this wishing well,
Wednesday afternoon.
Before my thoughts could ride
a breath.
It was my choice-
I said........yes.

From long ago,
but yesterday
I need to be
this other with me.
To bloom and laugh
to move across
this side I'm in,
of time and loss.

Call me when your sunset cries
when the morning is dark
and your feelings, then die.
I'll send you another-
wishing well.
For Yes,
and you, who knows this too.
that choice to ride
a breath, then.............die.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2005-05-29 06:52 PM

Call me when your sunset cries
when the morning is dark''''

~

sunsets seem to cry sometimes.....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-05-29 07:56 PM

good write
I enjoyed

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