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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2005-05-28 02:37 PM



in dreams did i see you

forgotten, i have

i weep for i miss you

in tears


the tides must have kept you

the garden, your home

in time will i see you

ever..

again?


show me the way

to the secret garden

so that i may hold you

once more


lead me, could you

to those hallowed grounds

where angels live

and spirits rejoice?


guide me, you can

before tears are begotten

walk with me

rest with me

in the secret garden


at peace shall we be

in the secret garden

fly with the angels shall we



CONFUCIOUS SAY: YOU STAND ON TOILET, YOU HIGH ON POT!


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timothysangel1973
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Posts 1725
Never close enough
1 posted 2005-05-28 02:48 PM


What a heartfelt write.  I have always said that each person has a "secret garden" of sorts.  A place to call their own in a world of chaos and confusion.

This was a beautiful sentiment m'friend.

Tima

adagio
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since 2005-03-19
Posts 449
Marrero, La.
2 posted 2005-05-28 03:17 PM


Very much enjoyed
adagio

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2005-05-28 03:51 PM


quote:
lead me, could you

to those hallowed grounds

where angels live

and spirits rejoice?



There is such deep longing expressed in these beautiful lines.

This secret garden does exist I am sure.

Love, Margherita


MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2005-05-28 06:41 PM



In this secret of garden of two
no one could ever be blue
and it's true...
it's there for you to be
and enjoy it eternally

--------------------

Thank you for this piece that comes like a slow heartfelt music

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2005-05-28 06:42 PM


this is beautiful

so glad I didn't miss it

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2005-05-29 02:24 PM


I found myself whispering your gentle words of longing and love. Beautifully penned.

May you and she fluorish and fly together forever with the angels in that secret garden.


EA

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
7 posted 2005-05-29 06:26 PM


So very beautiful this.
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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