Open Poetry #35 |
secret garden |
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
in dreams did i see you forgotten, i have i weep for i miss you in tears the tides must have kept you the garden, your home in time will i see you ever.. again? show me the way to the secret garden so that i may hold you once more lead me, could you to those hallowed grounds where angels live and spirits rejoice? guide me, you can before tears are begotten walk with me rest with me in the secret garden at peace shall we be in the secret garden fly with the angels shall we CONFUCIOUS SAY: YOU STAND ON TOILET, YOU HIGH ON POT! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
What a heartfelt write. I have always said that each person has a "secret garden" of sorts. A place to call their own in a world of chaos and confusion. This was a beautiful sentiment m'friend. Tima |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very much enjoyed adagio |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: There is such deep longing expressed in these beautiful lines. This secret garden does exist I am sure. Love, Margherita |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
In this secret of garden of two no one could ever be blue and it's true... it's there for you to be and enjoy it eternally -------------------- Thank you for this piece that comes like a slow heartfelt music ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful so glad I didn't miss it |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I found myself whispering your gentle words of longing and love. Beautifully penned. May you and she fluorish and fly together forever with the angels in that secret garden. EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful this. Very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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