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startin_fresh
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0 posted 2005-05-28 11:58 PM



Think of the times when
All was right with you
When it was sunny although
It was dark outside.

Touch the texture of the
Dream or hologram -
Is it real or not
I often wonder

Scrambled circuits in
My brain confuse me
When I try to grasp
The invisible handles

Order is desired
To meet perfection’s goal
Yet no matter how much
Is done – perfect it’s not

Perfectionism is a cruel
Existence and task master
How does one let go
Frustrations left untold

Nothing hurts more than sitting next to the one you love - knowing it will never be.

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timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2005-05-29 12:02 PM


"How does one let go
Frustrations left untold"

One writes !!

Great write here m'friend.

Tima

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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2 posted 2005-05-30 01:07 AM


This was a good write! I like it.
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