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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Curtain falls Upon your mind Tonight shines It is your night Center Stage Immersed within yourself The universe bombarding your open eyes Healing tears flood your wounds Who cares.. what others think.. Take a bow Curtain falls as you slip into a hypnotic sleep Who cares if all the world can see Through the looking glass of your dreams.. Take a bow The world is yours You no longer have to succumb to the disappointments lying at your feet Take a bow Curtain falls Tonight as every night to follow is your night To shed yourself of your mask Who cares.. what others think.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Ceinwyn, Great work .shouldn't it always be like that. adagio |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ceinwyn, I agree with Adagio 100%! You have a really creative way of writing. Much enjoyed.  ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
take a bow the night knows us best! Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's a good write |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, take a bow! I always enjoy your uniquely creative way of expressing yourself! It is wonderful to be reading your work again!  Big, warm hug! Linda |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
write more, post more, heal |
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