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Of Dream, Of Dream ( Collab With babygirlwlove)
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Of Dream, Of Dream ( Collab With babygirlwlove) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Of Dream, Of Dream See now the harsh amber husk of night, envelop the body’s sore insolence in a hardened wilderness of dream-scarves, Westward luring, these red muslin depths of wet petals cling desperate upon a black bough, leaning into lucidity with hands, sure to lift the perilous scent of orchids piled in a great sheathe of rain, you come, to shepherd my sorrow, gently strip the gypsy silk from my limbs, my temple, my tomb, opening a silence of ruined wings, your touch a path of soft, wild promises bathe my skin with seed, in these quiet silver pools of summer dream, and warm my child in your wings, as in the passing clouds pile themselves into a tumbled weave of violet blooms too fair to cover the limbs that hang heavy with the mists of desert storms late come to the sky or night as I yearn for some small breath that sleep might bring leaving me in slow satin dream where I am wrapped in more than the ache of these unsheathed nerves and cradled soft in seams folded twice across some muslin heart, of dream, I dream. Thank you Mari... for indulging the old man..lol and remind me in the future please.... of what a hard act your writing is to follow... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 Brava.. and I am left smiling you two! Excellent collaboration! I really want to care, |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good one U 2!!! enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Nothing less than what I'd expect--the styles are so similar tho Cap. 'bout time for this too. Reading you two has been like "call and answer" and finally, you meld. And what a baby this is! and I'm off and running today, so ta for now, and how appropriate I'd start my day panting. And nod, after reading this, I'll prolly stick to my lame ass story poems. *ducking Cap* hugs Mari |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
A seamless gathering of word, intellect and emotion. well done. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How lovely and of absolute value! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Chief~ the pleasure is absolutely...all mine... (((Thank you))) for posting it, and for putting up with my lunacy (in general)... ...and I think the best part was watching this one evolve on the page... you have always been and continue to be a great source of inspiration and strength for me.... love you, fierce~ **baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brava!! Pure poetry..exquisitely penned. ~Hugs to you both~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you. Both of you. I have been waiting for you. this was like...honey flow. Maree "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Hey PIP fam~ thanks so much for all the kind words and the support you have all given me...since Day 1... this is a wonderful community of writers...and I am so glad to be among you~ love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
You two are amazing together. I can hardly tell where one ends and the other begins- so intuned you are together. beautiful, beautiful words! ~tier |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thanks tier... collabs are truly not my forte...I usually botch these up and go off on tangents..lol...fortunately (for me)...I have a tolerant dance partner... thanks again for checking it out... love&light **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
About time!  My goodness I now have all your books Mari and it was still impossible to find the seams in this. This truly was and must be, 'the first dance.' Incredible work, and I bet you had fun getting into the swing of this one Ron, and you sure did it well! A real challenge it would be to write with either of you! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Sharon~ thanks for the looksee~ It was a delight to compose... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sand... meeting water... a perfect meld... Bravo! Brava! and thank you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
It's wonderful to see how you both compliment each other's talent. Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Sunshine~ Scorpio~ ((thanks so much for the peek)) love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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