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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-05-26 06:27 AM


Feeling Lost Without You

If only there was an end
To this lonely heartache
Many weeks I have tried
I wonder how long it will take

I can see no end in sight
Heartaches continue on
Weeks without the shine
Knowing loves glow as gone

Where is that bright side
Love is lost without glow
Weeks keep passing by
With only heartache to show

Heartaches are wrapped
Inside a melancholy blue
I see no glimmer of hope
I am feeling lost without you


HopeĀ©2005
With music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/91/poem_743262.html

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-05-26 07:12 AM


Sweetie, this was sorely bittersweet

Hugs and please know, you are not lost but loved a great deal.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-05-26 07:36 AM


I know how you feel
my heart goes out to you

HopeS
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3 posted 2005-05-26 11:50 AM


Thank you Lee for your sweet , kind , caring reply , it means so much

Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2005-05-26 11:51 AM


Thank you Dixie , your reply does mean so much ....

Hugs Hope

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5 posted 2005-05-28 06:35 AM


my heart goes out to you~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Margherita
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6 posted 2005-05-28 10:53 AM


Yes, I do understand the melancholy flowing within your heart, dear Hope, you express this so lovingly.

... you need to detach and open to the future, no better than that you need to open to the NOW.

You are loved and deeply lovable ... also by yourself to begin with.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-05-29 02:22 AM


Hugs...thinking back to the most intense heartbreak that I felt...which happened many years ago...but still seems so close at times...it was intense...and I'm glad that its way in the past...I remember when I stayed home with lots of free time...I thought about it a lot and suffered a lot...when I was at work...my mind was busy and I rarely thought about it...but yes, there are times when those thoughts come creeping in...and with no invitation...James
iliana
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8 posted 2005-05-29 02:26 AM


(((((Hope)))))) Bittersweet .... I loved the  song with the graphic.   ....jo
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9 posted 2005-05-29 11:08 AM


this is so heartfelt....*hugs* for you
timothysangel1973
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10 posted 2005-05-29 12:20 PM


wonderful write sweet lady
SmartChick
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11 posted 2005-05-29 12:21 PM


Hope, I know just how this feels. I have asked myself many times, when the heartaches will end.
HopeS
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12 posted 2005-05-29 12:30 PM


Thank you all for your kind , caring replies , they truly does mean a lot to me ,
The one I am missing is dealing with so much themselves , so hopefully all will be ok soon

Hope

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