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Open Poetry #35

Shooting Star

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-05-25 06:52 AM

In cloudless blue sky,
I see you wink at me,
above all to see,

As night shuts her eyes,
hues of darkest blues,
begin to brush the open sky,

The heavens holds you,
you hold my eyes,
golden light reflects inside,

Fate birthed you there,
created by my hearts desires,
while you burn to land,

There is a distance,
from where I stand,
to where you are,

You are my wish,
flaming inside my hands,
for true love comes once,

In a blink of an eye,
flying across the hearts sky,
~A shooting star....

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-05-25 09:12 AM

"There is a distance,
from where I stand,
to where you are,

You are my wish,
flaming inside my hands,
for true love comes once"

LOVED this!

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-05-26 02:31 AM

Beautiful and touching, to the heart.

..a flame in your hand...nice, I like that..

With words like these, my dear Lady, even a shooting star would sway from course...crash and burn.....at your feet....

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2005-05-26 04:21 AM

Catch me flying in your sky...showering borealis light from my words, cascading in brilliant illumination to your homage...a poem of celestial majesty...

Goldenrose.

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

4 posted 2005-05-26 04:41 PM

A wonerfull work indeed
very much enjoyed
adagio

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