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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-05-24 05:55 PM

From your sweet lips I harvest shadows’ tears,
Pure dew drops on the parquet of my soul;
I tread softly, and there your face appears
Where your song of love within my heart does toll;
There a candle’s flame so brightly shines; it casts
A golden glow, where no light had been —
Yet unquenched remains through the torrid blasts
Of catabatic wind, that sweeps unseen
Through the weathered shutters of my heart —
There your sweet voice sings a nightingale’s song,
So clear and bright, my heart’s red sea does part —
And now your voice and mine combined belong:
As one combined our song shall reach the stars
In passions’ ageless and immortal bars.

CG

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-05-24 06:56 PM

One of the things I like best
about good poets, are when
they throw in a word that is
not common in every day language...

and you did just that.

You also wrote a beautiful poem.

Thank you, CG.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-05-24 07:31 PM

this is really very pretty

I enjoyed

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

3 posted 2005-05-24 11:33 PM

A sonnet indeed, and a good one.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-05-24 11:34 PM

CG, you have a beautiful voice and it comes straight from your heart.

EA

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-05-25 12:01 PM

Enjoyed...James

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-05-25 07:18 AM

You make my heart sing~
You are the song my heart sings,
it is singing this moment~pittter-patter!
hear it beat, cling and clatter?

~Oh how I love the way you weave our magic words!

Spellbinding~Thank You!
~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-05-25 07:46 AM

lovely write

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2005-05-26 03:51 PM

Sunshine - thank you, I will endeavor to do more....of both.

ARH -

“...hear it beat, cling and clatter?...”

Yes I do - and feel it stone
and mortar ramparts shatter...

Thank you everyone for the kind comments.

CG

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