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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-05-25 06:41 AM

Make me feel like a woman,
dress me with your words of beauty,
Only then, do I become, beautiful,

Like a new rosebud, unfolding,
into the light and warmth of sun,
let me feel your touch,

Words that are silky and smooth,
caressing the depths of my heart,
painting my face with a smile,

Your words, I ache to hear,
dancing back and forth with mine,
Like two leaves caught-up,
inside the wind, moving chimes,

The floodgates have burst open,
loves spillway released,
pouring from my soul into yours,

Becoming loves fine wine,
we become intoxicated,
drinking eachothers love,
desireing more,

Make me feel like a woman,
shower poetic words upon me,
For that is what your heart
was created for....

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-05-25 07:24 AM

very pretty

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2005-05-25 07:26 AM

Thanks Dixie..glad to see you back!

~hope you stay

~love and hugs
~ARh

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-05-25 07:33 PM

Lovely...James

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2005-05-26 02:28 AM

“...two leaves caught-up inside the wind (of Fate)....”

Loved it, loved the whole poem, ARH, thank you.

A man’s heart was created to admire, cherish, love, and respect woman’s - only then we can truly become one.

And where beauty is....words will follow...words will find it...and yours, ARH, is easily found...

In the words of John Clare (Emblem):

"The roses steeped in morning dews
Would every eye enthrall,
But woman, she alone subdues;
Her beauty conquers all.”

CG

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2005-05-26 04:19 AM

From across the miles i hear your words speak to me...time for mine to speak to you again i think...like a covered bridge waiting in every weather..patiently awaiting loves return beneath its gentle shelter..
a poem of loving wonder....thank you..

Goldenrose.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-05-28 06:28 AM

such a beautiful heart and soul expressing
love~

your writings touch deep~ thanks for
sharing

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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