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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2005-05-21 01:36 AM

so it is
perhaps
as it
should be

my thoughts
flung in
abstract
adhere to nothing

but the now
of my soul
screams
her name aloud

and I would not be
without a witness
as these tender moments
bloom into a full obsession

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2005-05-21 02:15 AM

I do so enjoy your words

m

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-05-21 05:56 AM

wonderful write

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-05-21 09:59 AM

wow! this is really fantastic

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2005-05-21 10:05 AM

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2005-05-24 04:05 AM

Im sure she always watches, and never misses a moment of your voice even when it screams for her to leave...

we all are drawn in by one soul or another

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2005-05-24 08:34 AM

"my thoughts
flung in
abstract
adhere to nothing"

Very cool! love those lines!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-05-26 08:57 AM

enjoyed the entire poem...well done

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

8 posted 2005-05-26 04:08 PM

Very well done,
enjoyed

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2005-05-26 04:14 PM

"my thoughts
flung in
abstract
adhere to nothing"

~ Uniquely creative and expressive lines!

Love & Light,
EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2005-05-26 04:19 PM

Very well done and much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2005-05-26 11:12 PM

never cease to impress

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

12 posted 2005-05-28 06:44 AM

a beauty~
enjoyed, thanks for sharing

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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