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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2005-05-23 04:34 AM



My heart yearns for an uprising,
to oust the despotism of my soul.
To bring rise to a revolution of faith.
Bringing my life to be in steadfast harmony
         with a pure democracy.

The Wind that howls through the trees
a timely bellow from below.
Nothingness, and a shadow cast
emptiness in a cowards last breath.
defiant and true, genuine.

Masquerading and parading,
blatant and sound.
Goodness, pain, broken and torn.
every moment, bringing back a memory
each moment precious or riled.

A path marked for truth,
amongst other simple thoughts,
many tears, forgotten tomorrows,
weakened the strengthened
unified within.

[This message has been edited by Kellie_Cantrell (05-24-2005 10:26 PM).]

© Copyright 2005 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2005-05-23 07:29 PM


Beautiful write.

Eric

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-05-23 07:45 PM


very cool write

and if you want an uprising, you can do it!

Larry C
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since 2001-09-10
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3 posted 2005-05-23 09:37 PM


Yup Kellie. It was a good write. But what's a "treesm"?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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