Open Poetry #35 |
The Perfect Woman |
CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Man asked Time to take a stand — Was the Perfect Woman ever found, Ever walked upon the farthest land, Ever touched upon the solid ground? Has She ever danced on wave-kissed sand, Her song echoed a velvet sound? Man will tempt the earthly span, The sky; the mountains; oceans chart, The World to search within his plan... — Yet She all times of him is part, The Perfect Woman close to man, Of each man searching for her heart. Inside of him She slowly stole; The art of each man’s own creation; The vision of his heart and soul, The image of his formulation. The rights; the wrongs; his fated role, Each man bound to his own station. For She is what you unknown claim, The Spirit that your thoughts admire. For She is there – your friend, your dame, Your guiding light, your sweet desire; She’s there with every glance you aim; She is sole Judge; She rules by fire. And the day will come in time revealed, When woman of the Earthly norm With truth and love dissolves your shield — And your Perfect Woman will transform, Approving - and Her choice then sealed She’ll merge within that Earthly form... ...And there within She’ll remain bound — The Perfect Woman you have found... CG |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Perfect words from a perect soul of a man~ ~Love ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
O, this is sssssso beautiful ... Yes I believe she lives with and in each of us all too. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautifully put~ My spirit will rise |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
GREAT write! I believe I have found the perfect woman and I have faith that I will get a chance again to hold her and walk through love's fire together. Good luck to you and yours, a touching write |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply lovely |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you again for this~ Your words for me are PERFECT! (Her song echoed a velvet sound?)(She rules by fire.)(With truth and love dissolves your shield )(The Spirit that your thoughts admire. For She is there – your friend, your dame, Your guiding light, your sweet desire; She’s there with every glance you aim) ( ~Thy Fiery Lady "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful...much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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