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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Waiting Keep your eyes open They won't call your name you've got six minutes get yourself there Do what you need what's taking so long? Hurry you must go no time to lose Now is the time Quickly get set up others are waiting waiting for me Nervous,nervous Fingers twich in time anticipation can inspire adagio:< |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Waiting in line at the pharmacy again?  (I know, I know, but don't worry about it R--you are already guilty by association here at Pip--but not to worry, they're a pretty understanding bunch.) This made me smile, because I could SEE you fidgeting... we really gotta get a handle on that nerve thang, huh? Hugs and *winks* Ralph.  Enjoyed. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Actually waiting to get on line at the library K, just to post this sub-standard piece of junk of mine . Well I hope someone gets a kick out of it. adagio  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Someone did, sweetie. So tell me? How many stacks of books did you knock over while you waited? laughing (I'm teasing you, yanno.) I DID enjoy, and next week if I'm feeling better, I'll make it up to you. Come over here and we'll get your picture posted, k? Give Leah my best. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at this... So enjoying the fact that you realize we are waiting for you! to show up! |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Didn't knock over any books today but I do think I may have embarrassed Leah a little sitting a that little table with all my messy assortment of notebooks and clipboards. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know what that wait is like |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
adagio, anticipation can inspire Yes it can. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
adagio Like Sy said...for me anticipation is almost as good as what is anticipated. I enjoyed your poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I came back to challenge you Ralphie--tell us a story! (um, that skiing trip to Colorado maybe?) hmmm...c'mon *battin' eyelashes* Four line stanzas, a-b-a-b rhyme scheme *chuckle* see ya next week, and wear black, you're being photographed. |
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