Open Poetry #35 |
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And You Would Know Love |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida ![]() |
If my name were Aphrodite I'd send an aphrodisiac of sweet ambrosia. A song as tender as the Humming birds wing would sing out to you. A kiss as soft as the feathers flighting touch would sit upon your lips. And you would know love as only the gods command. marty |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wooooooo ![]() this is awesome! how beautifully you describe... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Sea, an old broad with great memories. LOL martyjo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wow..your name doesn't need to be Aphrodite with words like that....and, you know, I believe every word of it. ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marty... you've written a special poem... and it seems to me, it would be one of another time for the first love. It is... a keeper |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
James, Thank you very much. Mike, My secret LOL Sunshine, ditto above. LOL I was too young at sixteen to have express those thoughts. Much too naive then. Maybe I am saying now what I did not know how to then. martyjo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
James, Thank you very much. Mike, My secret LOL Sunshine, ditto above. LOL I was too young at sixteen to have expressed those thoughts. Much too naive then. Maybe I am saying now what I did not know how to then. martyjo [This message has been edited by latearrival (05-21-2005 12:42 PM).] |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Please excuse the double entry. Having a problem deleting it. marty |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Late- This poem is in tiself an aphrpdesiac adagio (please pardon spelling) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
marty, this is just beautiful |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Dixie, love marty |
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