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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-05-16 10:58 PM

Yet

this isn’t the first time
I have misunderstood it all

today I find myself
weaker than I have ever been
and stronger than I ever was

I have made friends of enemies
and enemies of friendly ones

there are times that no tear drops
will ever wash away the pain

yet,
I have never been
the type of woman
to mince my words

but in this hour
happiness rings
in tones of sad

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2005-05-17 02:58 AM

I am so glad you do not mince your words, Helen.
They make for the best kind of poetry,
and for so many feelings I misunderstood, and finally understand.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2005-05-18 10:59 PM

Well I was gonna quote on my favorite parts, but shoot... I like it all so well that I would have basically just copied the entire poem here... lol

This is wonderful, and it says so much about you, as well as other women.

Thanks for sharing

Tima

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-05-18 11:34 PM

there are days like that, yes

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

4 posted 2005-05-19 12:28 PM

Yes it seems there is some pain that no teardrops can wash away but no shame in trying.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-05-19 12:39 PM

"but in this hour
happiness rings
in tones of sad"

Excellent write Helen!!
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2005-05-20 12:14 PM

You're simply ermazing, woman.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2005-05-20 11:14 AM

OneSlick~

yet ... you remain as lovely and talented as ever~

*Huglets* you~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2005-05-20 12:06 PM

It is an ambiguous life at best.

very well portrayed Helen!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2005-05-20 12:30 PM

Wonderfully penned , In-between days , yes I have lots of those

Hope

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-05-23 03:18 AM

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