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"If I have played my part well, clap your hands, and dismiss me" |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I would dance for you but my feet are damned and you know it. Contrary to what you may think, I am far from graceful. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
but your pen is not (far from graceful). |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write Kaoru... that is awesome... So much poetic power in those few lines Going to the library )))hugs((( Tima I may hate myself in the morning - but I'm gonna love you tonight |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
laughing Can I kiss your two left feet?  me too, lovie, me too this delighted me, in a familiar self- deprecating sort of way yer a delight |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Meg....dismiss you never! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I think it's all about who you are dancing for and how they define grace.. I personally (not that you asked) think you are one of the most graceful souls I know.   "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Kaoru, Great piece of writing Who you are dancing for or who you are dancing with can make all the differance I am frequently asked to dance even though she knows That I can't dance worth a damn! but I do it anyway adagio |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Personally. I prefer to think of myself as "maladroit"...much nicer than "klutz" But, this is grace, Megs |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Extremely graceful, pleasantly discerning... and I agree with all above. |
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Mr_Brady's_Housekeeper New Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 8 |
elegance in this ache enjoyed Alice |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, you sure had ME fooled. But your pen sure dances nicely. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
i'm with Kacy, your pen sure does dance nicely mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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