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Margherita
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0 posted 2005-05-19 08:15 AM




Chagall

Weightless ascension


* * *


In weightless ascension

we move into soul space,

our lissom bodies transparent,

spiralling effortlessly

clinging like magnets,

expressing intimate grace.

As a pure divine song

we transcend time

dancing in harmony,

finding each other

through parted lips.

You and I breathing as one,

a cosmic tremor sealed

in a sacred soul embrace.


* * *


Love, Margherita

© Copyright 2005 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-05-19 08:17 AM


Margherita!!!!!

Where have you been, have missed you terribly...this was absolute flying...floating on time's mind....the serenity and peace breaths close to the readers heart...this was magic!  Thank you

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2005-05-19 08:22 AM


yes above the clouds
way above
where there is no landing

you lifted me there with this.........lovely
morning masterpiece

Enchantress
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3 posted 2005-05-19 08:55 AM


I could almost feel myself rising up as I read this beautiful piece.
Extremely well written and much enjoyed!!
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-05-19 09:01 AM


Soul space...
souls embrace...

it is always such a pleasure
to read your poetry, m'friend!

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-05-19 09:07 AM


Where have you been, I have missed your poetry!  These lines are awesome.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
a cosmic tremor sealed
in a sacred soul embrace.


Very well done!


Kahlil
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6 posted 2005-05-19 09:10 AM


Perfect companions, Chagall and your beautiful expression.  I always feel Light after reading you.

K

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-05-19 09:23 AM


Margherita
Missed your lovely reads.

Margherita
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8 posted 2005-05-19 10:38 AM


Thank you my dear poet friends! I have missed you too.
Would love to stay more often here ... but it's not always possible, unless I sacrifice my sleep!
Love and Joy.
Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2005-05-19 07:48 PM


a beauty, yes
Susan
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10 posted 2005-05-21 11:20 AM


a deep sigh here

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2005-05-21 05:03 PM


A masterpiece of description.
Fully enjoyed.
TD

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12 posted 2005-05-21 06:09 PM


OH wow! there is such a love through this that speaks so beautifully and leaves me sighing....

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

Margherita
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13 posted 2005-05-22 05:57 AM


Thank you all for sharing this moment of ascension with me so lovingly.

Love and have a wonderful Sunday all!

Margherita

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14 posted 2005-05-23 12:40 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me feel like I was floating off my chair, imagining how true love must really feel as I still dream of feeling loves first kiss and everything, yay! (angel friendship hugs) This is enchanting, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Ericc
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15 posted 2005-05-23 07:29 PM


Perfect Margherita.

Love,
Eric

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2005-05-23 10:02 PM


I was weightlessy spiralling up into the ethers with your serenely expressive writing.

Your poetry wraps the reader in a "sacred soul embrace".

Love & Light,
Linda

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Gaia
17 posted 2005-05-23 11:42 PM


"a cosmic tremor sealed
in a sacred soul embrace."
WOW! loved that line

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