Open Poetry #35 |
A Cup Of Dreams |
kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
As I hold this cup staring into the liquid that is black as night my dreams surface and the black starts to fade replace by rainbow colors that are in a sunset scene I continue to stare as the steam rises up watching as my dreams unfold right before my eyes time seems to stand still as I ponder on what I see A distant phone ringing brings me back to reality as I set my cup down to answer the phone my thoughts continue to go back to what I've seen And even though to some its just an ordinary cup of coffee it will, to me, always be a cup, my cup, of dreams Kaleanna |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lost in thoughts in a very profound place to be...love the images here, they hypnotized me so, almost fell right off my chair...hehe Lovely |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I liked this very much! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That first cup your cup is always the best. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KaleAnna~ Lovely thoughts over that cup of coffee~ I often do the exact same thing ... lost in the mesmerize of daydreams~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow what wonders coffee can do! love this poem |
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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
Thank you all I am glad that you all liked the poem. hugssssssssss kaleanna |
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