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kaleanna
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0 posted 2005-05-18 10:18 AM



As I hold this cup
staring into the liquid
that is black as night

my dreams surface
and the black starts to fade
replace by rainbow colors
that are in a sunset scene

I continue to stare
as the steam rises up
watching as my dreams
unfold right before my eyes

time seems to stand still
as I ponder on what I see
A distant phone ringing
brings me back to reality

as I set my cup down
to answer the phone
my thoughts continue to
go back to what I've seen

And even though to some
its just an ordinary cup of coffee
it will, to me, always be
a cup, my cup, of dreams


Kaleanna

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-05-18 10:26 AM


lost in thoughts in a very profound place to be...love the images here, they hypnotized me so, almost fell right off my chair...hehe
Lovely

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-05-18 11:23 AM


  I liked this very much!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-05-18 11:26 AM



That first cup
your cup
is always the best.

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4 posted 2005-05-18 12:22 PM


KaleAnna~
Lovely thoughts over that cup of coffee~
I often do the exact same thing ... lost in the mesmerize of daydreams~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2005-05-18 02:32 PM


wow
what wonders coffee can do!

love this poem

kaleanna
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6 posted 2005-05-18 06:02 PM


Thank you all

I am glad that you all liked the poem.


hugssssssssss


kaleanna

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