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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-17 07:32 AM

early will you watch my hands
putting motion in the sky
stirring the clouds
with my wand

will you say show me the magic
let it splash on my skin
let me feel the warm
and know the flavors

lean close then tomorrow
to my horizon
let your pale mountains
overflow the black seamed sky

and whisper the permission
that is not needed by a warrior
when the jaunty one
steals the treasure of a dream

and kisses the wrists between the knots
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dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-05-17 08:03 AM

yuppers, show me the money babe...and I don't mean in dollars...hehe

and whisper the permission
that is not needed by a warrior
when the jaunty one
steals the treasure of a dream

this was...absolute romantisisum...as is the entire poem...this, is one of my favorites of yours....love your poetic gift

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-05-17 08:36 AM

And it all melts...
in that moment between
twilight

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-05-17 08:53 AM

thanks you two...lee j you are a sweetheart with your eyes..

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sunshine, you are a sunshine morning always

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-05-17 10:31 AM

ahhha yes, and you are magic, aren't you?

yes, I do believe you are

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-05-17 10:42 AM

love each and every view here - the last line - it slays me - wonderful dear D-

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-05-17 11:13 AM

suesea, thanks lady friend, those mountains bring me pleasure with each dawning day.

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susan mrs, thanks babe for the eyes and handcuffs (grin)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-05-17 11:26 AM

You create magic with words Dark..
yes you do.....

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

8 posted 2005-05-17 11:27 AM

"early will you watch my hands
putting motion in the sky
stirring the clouds
with my wand"

now what is that you can do with your hands????

You know I love this D.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2005-05-17 12:26 PM

GS, thanks little lady for the eyes here

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ms nine, so pleased that you enjoyed it, thank you for the read

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-05-17 03:21 PM

show me the magic

your a real pleasure

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2005-05-17 04:03 PM

ms groves, thank you lady, you are a blessing with your eye touch

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