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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2005-05-15 04:09 PM

I’m not the one the sun shines on
but I can understand
why mother, sky, moves on and glides
to another far off land.

The one she bore she can’t ignore
but he travels and he travels
rising so in different moods
and setting in review
until in heart he slowly weeps
and mourns the loss of sleep.

The son from childhood now a man
but I can understand
when free in spirit he would leave
a mother’s hand behind
and turn a forceful influence
into a memory.

She follows though he doesn’t know
but, of course, he knows enough
to keep the goodness locked inside
and shine down onto land
the rays of an imposter
and disavower of the truth.

So shines the sun on everyone
but there are dreams in the ether
between a mother and a son
and story tellers numbered few
say soon they’ll fade away
unless the sun, the son,
shines down internal love
and not the weakened rays
of outer falsity.

The sun, the son - another year is done
and the mother, sky, moves on and glides
to another far off land!

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

1 posted 2005-05-15 06:03 PM

Maybe soon the sun will be obscured by the growing cover of clouds. Will that bring relief or sadness? and the son too may soon be obscured. Enjoy what you may while you may. But what the heck do I know I'm only a rookie here.

adagio

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2005-05-16 04:03 PM

Awesome write.

Eric

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-05-17 03:28 PM

yes, an awesome write~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-05-17 03:33 PM

Excellent write Helen...very much enjoyed!
hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-05-17 03:35 PM

wonderful write Helen, much enjoyed.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-05-17 04:02 PM

I was moved to read this graceful and magical write, in the softest of whispers...

Linda

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2005-05-17 04:39 PM

Thank you all so much for the read.

Linda - I do believe you were moved correctly.

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