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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-05-17 12:42 PM



The Girl With The Black Pearls


She wore black pearls, the precious
girl that made me believe in love.
I loved the way those pearls caressed
her neck in the discotheque, it was
more than enough to make me sigh.
But then the necklace broke, and I awoke
to find spilled pearls upon my bed.
Oh how I would scream if it were only a
dream, but the black pearls tell me
that she was there, and I truly care
for the precious girl with the black
pearls, that made me believe in love.


JamesLee
May17
2005

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1 posted 2005-05-17 01:43 PM


Nice one James...
then she was and is real!
Hugs~Nancy

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throw all the paint on it you can.
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2 posted 2005-05-17 01:44 PM


Beautiful writing James.
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3 posted 2005-05-17 03:15 PM


enjoyed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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4 posted 2005-05-17 04:50 PM


I loved the visual you created with this one - just lovely!

~* C'est la vie *~

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