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Open Poetry #35

valley of forgotten

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-22 08:29 AM

there are hollow skys there
at your edge of shadows
I speak your name
but you laugh and change it
to another song
and hurry your wet leaves
to another tree to dance

you are a kitten in your mind
but my time is short
as a candle
and my wax skin
does not crave your nails
to be insincere decorations
so I ride the tin man's wagon

and breathe the sweat
of his galloping stallions
to the pathway of curves there
at odin's valley of dreams
where my metal will not rust
in the virginity of latter rain
and my leather will stay new

on the stone stag's shoulders
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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-05-22 09:52 AM

this feels so sad....

hope things are ok for you

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-05-22 10:19 AM

feel the depth in this - and the ache - am sorry for the sad d- may vahalla embrace you and odin give you ease -

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-05-22 10:30 AM

nice one DS

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-05-22 10:32 AM

Always another hill
and yet another valley
to conquer...

Enjoy the quest, m'friend.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-05-22 05:46 PM

DS

Hi! Would that be the San Fernando Valley?

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-05-23 07:48 AM

thanks gang,,

actully this is lake powell again...even more of a change than a few weeks ago

I wonder if she will eventually be
a stranger to the colo river

thanks for the reads

D

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