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Open Poetry #35

Spliced by Splintering Wind

Dautz Write
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since 2004-11-16

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0 posted 2005-05-16 08:13 PM

The world slowed as it shifted poles;
Backward the rivers flowed.
The current, confused and swelling
Upheaved its earthy load.
But for one instant,
Within the Magnetic Turmoil
      the world paused...

And, of One, they began to grow.

For he was the rock, and she the sand,
Spliced together by splintering wind.

     ~dautz

[This message has been edited by Dautz Write (05-17-2005 03:51 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2005-05-16 09:21 PM

loved this! very very creative write

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-05-16 09:24 PM

For he was the rock, and she the sand,
Spliced together by splintering wind.

Love this!! Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-05-17 05:23 AM

enjoyed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-05-17 08:12 AM

But for one instant,
Within the Magnetic Turmoil
the world paused...

And, of One, they began to grow.

that was amazing...ohhhh be still my heart...this picked me up and gave me the biggest hug...wonderful writing!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-05-17 01:48 PM

DW...I would love to know
what inspired this...

the imagery is wonderful!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-05-17 01:51 PM

A very beautiful write..very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2005-05-17 06:00 PM

Interesting concept

Gloom

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2005-05-18 09:31 PM

I'm glad I stopped to read...this was good

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