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Determination
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Determination |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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and so, he paired a tenor new connections, spinning the world it is, that practice that keeps on foot solar slogan’s crusading, illogical within some genus initiative, providing framework self-centered warmth alive, piling rocks when body aches, its good enough a place of worship in late afternoon looking back at me with childlike heart those dreams of being a gardener greeting summer with open arms when winter’s cold, finds it’s martyrs it is a price I’d willingly pay when weary stands firm and does it’s greatest there, deep, alive, reside the spirits abilities flaring spontaneous in that ol familiar gut feeling bone breaker mountains with rutted roads pointing toward the far side it is then, and only then, I know I’m alive |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
it is a price I’d willingly pay when weary stands firm and does it’s greatest there, deep, alive, reside the spirits abilities flaring spontaneous in that ol familiar gut feeling ~*~ You've been in my mirror again...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved that bone breaker line |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"it is then, and only then, I know I’m alive" You are one gutsy gal...always writing from your heart and soul with such spirit, which I always admire. K |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 it is then and only then! yep.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very challenging piece "when winter's cold finds martyrs" worth a second look. adagio |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lee this is pure poetry!!! you tell it like it is, always.. ant I appreciate that!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"bone breaker mountains with rutted roads" ~ I've travelled a few of them myself! Lee, in every poem of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading, there are always lines that stick in my head! BTW I am glad that your determination has kept you alive!  Loving hugs, Linda "We are born of star dust, and to the stars we shall one day return." ~ Linda L. Dowd |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved the read Lee |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I’d willingly pay when weary stands firm and does it’s greatest there, deep, alive, reside the spirits abilities flaring spontaneous in that ol familiar gut feeling bone breaker mountains with rutted roads pointing toward the far side it is then, and only then, I know I’m alive" No doubt you truly would. Perfect! Classic Lee J, with class. JL  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wise words~ My spirit will rise |
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