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Open Poetry #35

All that is left

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-05-13 04:58 PM

Breathing something so
easy to do around you,
how my heart floats
everytime you enter
the room.

Now the room is dark

And the curtains
are drawn

All that is
left of you is a shadowy
figure and the essents
of your smell upon
the pillow cases....

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2005-05-15 06:23 PM

oh dear, how i know this.

there's only one thing to do, pull those curtains open, let the light in and wash them pillow cases.

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2005-05-15 06:26 PM

A touching poem. And I agree with Dark Angel.

believe in what your heart feels...

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2005-05-16 09:57 PM

that has been done

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-05-17 12:54 PM

Enjoyed...James

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-05-17 03:25 PM

understanding this one~
nicely written~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-05-17 03:32 PM

all to well I know this feeling. Well done, honest and pure write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-05-17 03:35 PM

Oh this aches...
well said!
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-05-18 09:19 PM

very cool write here

I love the ones that ache

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