navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Breathe on me
Open Poetry #35
Post A Reply Post New Topic Breathe on me Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
jellybeans
Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298


0 posted 2005-05-16 10:56 AM


I am still
my sail is slack
there is no turbulence
at this moment
and I am thankful for that
but I have checked
and I know my rudder
is pointed toward Thee
yet I am not
moving

Lord I would ask you
to send me a tug
lest I in my lacking
get in someone else’s way
or a barge
for its possible I am
broken down
but no
Lord
lest I forget whose creation
I am
and my purpose in this life
I will pray
Lord send me peace
inside this stillness
and patience
until You breathe
on me


© Copyright 2005 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-05-16 11:01 AM



Please,
fold my hands
within yours?

A beautiful prayer, K...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-05-16 11:10 AM


He IS breathing air in to your sails! It just that it may be imperceptible at the present time.

I pray that your sails will soon billow with the Life Force and that it will be smooth sailing for you ~ at full speed ahead!

Love & God's Light,
EA

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
3 posted 2005-05-16 12:55 PM


Lord
lest I forget whose creation
I am
and my purpose in this life
I will pray
Lord send me peace
inside this stillness
and patience
until You breathe
on me

May He indeed send you peace and patience... for you breathe goodness into our lives.

Beautiful work, my friend!!

jellybeans
Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298

4 posted 2005-05-16 03:04 PM


ah ladies, if you are not precious, sigh... then nothing is..and oh, you must know that when He breathes, my poetry will take you with me every where I go.....that is one of the gifts we have been given inside these pages of blue
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2005-06-05 09:59 AM


This is achingly beautiful, dear jellybeans!

May you soar in His winds!

Love.
Margherita

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2005-06-05 02:19 PM


SweetJellyGal~

Oh ... oh ... this is just ... well, just such a tenderly poignant piece of excellent poetry to tug the heart~

He has *gifted* you with the talent to pen when the well is overflowing ... and the patience to wait when it is not~
You have learned His Will ... so we will all wait with you, sweet poetess~

*Huglets* to you~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Breathe on me

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary